Schizophrenia–an excerpt from my script

Im currently working on a script that I hope to be my first short film to be entered into the short film circuit. It deals with a man who is schizophrenic and has anxiety disorders that keeps him from leaving his home. Here is an excerpt from my script that i was hoping to get some feedback on. And i just wanted to get it out there because i tend to procrastinate and not follow through, i feel like if i put it out there, i may follow through with finishing it.

Script Page 1

Script Page 2

I hope to highlight the struggles of mental illness with this script, and the way it devastates a whole family. Please let me know what you think and what i may need to work on. Thanks!

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10 thoughts on “Schizophrenia–an excerpt from my script

  1. I’ve never known anyone personally, as in a family member, with mental illness but I do know that it’s not something that goes away overnight. It’s hard on everyone involved. We had some patients that suffered various disorders and a couple of them would not even leave their homes for funerals NOR doctor appointments. I had to go to their homes to check on them. Of course you didn’t want to know all of this lol. You’re doing great, keep up the good work.

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