Im currently working on a script that I hope to be my first short film to be entered into the short film circuit. It deals with a man who is schizophrenic and has anxiety disorders that keeps him from leaving his home. Here is an excerpt from my script that i was hoping to get some feedback on. And i just wanted to get it out there because i tend to procrastinate and not follow through, i feel like if i put it out there, i may follow through with finishing it.
I hope to highlight the struggles of mental illness with this script, and the way it devastates a whole family. Please let me know what you think and what i may need to work on. Thanks!